Paul Hollingshead
Co-Founder, Co-Chairman
American Writers & Artists Inc.
Follow them and I guarantee you’ll be an A-level
copywriter within the next six months …
Dear AWAI Student,
It’s a question I’m often asked … by AWAI members, writers I’m mentoring, writers just breaking into the business:
“I’m getting to the point of having a good understanding of the copywriting process – but how do I break through to that next level, where everything becomes, well, automatic?”
It’s a great question …
Because, as copywriters, we all go through the process.
We learn the basics.
We get to know the business.
We gain a good understanding of what our “job” as a copywriter is.
And then we write …
And for many, that’s when frustration sets in.
It’s only natural. We’re eager to succeed, after all. We want to prove to ourselves (and the world) that we can write the next blockbuster control … the kind of “career-launching” letter that will solidify your place in our industry as an “A-level” copywriter.
Now, I know when I’m asked this question, I can pretty much assume the person asking it is at that “frustration” stage: “I love writing copy … I know I can be good … but I’m just not quite there yet … ”
But here’s the good news …
The very fact you can ask that question means you are on the precipice of success.
Because if you can write average copy – you can very easily write great copy.
And the way to make it happen is a very easy, three-step process:
Step One: Keep writing.
My good friend and terrific copywriter Justin Ford summed it up perfectly in a conversation I had with him years ago: “You need to write a trunk full of bad copy before you can write great copy.” It’s very simple. The more you write, the better writer you’ll be.
Step Two: Read and study as many great direct-mail promotions as you can.
I say this emphatically: I wouldn’t have the success I’ve had as a copywriter had I not gotten into the habit of reading and studying at least one successful direct-mail letter a day … and it’s something I still practice to this day.
Step Three: Make the commitment to yourself today to never stop learning.
Now I can’t help you much with “Step One,” except stress to you its importance.
You’ll never be a great painter unless you put a brush to the canvass. You’ll never be a great golfer unless you swing at the ball. And you’ll never be a great writer until you let your words flow onto paper.
But I can help you with the other two crucial steps.
And that’s what I’m writing you about today …
So if you’re currently working through AWAI’s Accelerated Program for Six-Figure Copywriting, and you’re eager … and you’re thinking: “Wow, this is exactly what I’ve been waiting for. I need to make this happen for me fast!” – then you’ll want to pay careful attention.
Because for you, we’ve created something very, very special …
It’s something that will not only let you take that crucial “giant leap forward” in your copywriting career – it’ll propel you past the competition … and give you the knowledge, skills, and confidence you need to out-write and outperform some of the top copywriters on the planet.
It’ll be like an actor suddenly acquiring the talent it takes to perform on Broadway … or an athlete suddenly having the skills to compete at the highest level of a professional sport.
You’ll understand our business of copywriting – and the art of selling – at such a profoundly high level that there will be no limit to how successful you can become.
I know these are some mighty big promises …
But I also know they’re achievable. I’ve seen it happen with me, my colleagues, and AWAI members who have gone on to be successful working copywriters.
In fact, when we were putting together our AWAI “Wall of Fame” project last year, we discovered that our most successful members – those who are working as paid, professional copywriters right now – made the decision to take this all-important “shortcut” to success.
Among them …
One member even described this experience as “an awakening” – like a bright light was flipped on and suddenly everything about the copywriting process became clear.
Virtually everyone has said they had no idea the impact this single decision would have on their writing skills, their persuasive abilities and their copywriting careers.
All you need to do to make it happen for you is take that all-important step from where you are now … to the “next level” of success. How do you do it?
“Even though I’m not finished with the Master’s Program yet, I wanted to get started building clients right away, so I approached a former employer.
He asked if I could do something to help him bring in more distributors for his business. I immediately sent him a plan that included a 5-letter series based on what I’ve learned so far in the Master’s Program.
My client was happy to pay me $7,500 for the 5 four-page letters … He’s more than pleased with the results, and wants to replicate the program three times in 2005 (for which I’ll be paid an additional $10,500!).”
– John W.,
Lufkin, TX
You make a commitment to elevate your writing skills … and learn the bigger, deeper secrets of copywriting …
… beginning with what I consider to be the five most powerful “big picture” secrets any copywriter can know.
Learning these is like stepping back and seeing your whole mission as a copywriter through a crystal-clear pane of glass. You’ll know precisely what you need to do and say to produce the most convincing sales letters possible.
Then it’s just a matter of “fine-tuning” your writing by applying a series of deeper secrets that’ll have you doing all the “little things” better. This is where everything comes to you more effortlessly … and your copy is substantially stronger, more persuasive.
I’ll tell you about many of these specific “Master’s” secrets in a moment … including details on a brand-new secret we’ve just added that could very well be the breakthrough you need to establish yourself as one of the masters of our industry.
Once you discover them, you’ll be surprised at how quickly things will fall into place for you … and how any one of the secrets you learn can touch off a domino effect of successes.
Let me explain …
… by telling you a quick story about what I consider to be my “breakthrough” moment – and how it almost immediately propelled me into the ranks of some of the most successful and highest-paid copywriters in the country.
When I was starting as a copywriter, there was no AWAI program to follow. I learned by studying direct-mail promotions that were working. And from those, I worked long and hard to figure out the basic outline of a letter – and what it had to say in order to be successful.
Things went along pretty much okay. My first couple of letters enjoyed some good success. One letter that I worked closely on with Michael Masterson wound up grossing over a million dollars. But there were a few others that didn’t do much at all …
And then something happened …
“The Master’s Program took all of the concepts from the first program (plus quite a few more!) … and went much, much deeper into each one. It didn’t just show me how the techniques worked, it told me why – and then gave me money-making opportunities to put these powerful concepts into practice. Just last week, I came home from vacation to $2300 worth of royalty checks – my first ones! And I currently have three more packages in the mail that will pay out royalties in the coming months. In my mind, that’s the Master’s Program paying off.”
— Monica D.,
Philadelphia, PA
Agora Publishing – the company I was writing for – began holding these “copy critiquing sessions,” where we’d all get on a conference call and critique the sales letters we were working on.
The two people heading up my sessions were none other than Bill Bonner and Michael Masterson – two of the greatest copywriters and most successful direct-response masters of our time. (Bill Bonner, as you may know, is the founder and president of Agora – one of the largest newsletter publishers in the world … and Michael Masterson, well, you know his story.)
And each time we’d have a call, they’d go over all the things that were right and wrong with my letter – and suggest ways to make it better.
But something else was happening in those sessions that I didn’t realize at the time … something that would ultimately have a huge impact on my life …
During the course of every call, Bill and Michael would quietly reveal two, maybe three, of their most private and powerful copywriting secrets. Whether I realized it or not at the time, it was those deeper writing secrets that were transforming me from the ordinary copywriter I was to the “master” copywriter I’d soon become.
Those critiquing sessions lasted just a little over a year. Agora was growing quickly, and Michael and Bill simply became too busy to go over all the letters from all the copywriters Agora was hiring.
“The Master’s Program is definitely a huge factor in my success. Using AWAI Master techniques, I’ve produced several web copy jobs during the last year and a half that are still live on the Internet. Plus I recently created a DM package for a national mortgage refinance company. If it becomes their new control, I’ll get a 5-figure bonus.”
— Vicky H.,
Denton, TX
“AWAI’s Master’s Program has been invaluable to me. The deeper secrets have put me head and shoulders about the competition. As a result, there’s only been one week in the last 3 years when I haven’t had work … I typically work on several projects at one time … and my income doubled last year.”
— Glenn S.,
Mountain Grove, ON
But here’s my point …
The Masters Secret
That Changed My Life …
The Secret of
“Small Miracles”
by Peter Beteul
I remember a statement by Rosser Reeves, one of the great advertising giants, that changed my copy approach and greatly improved results.
Someone once asked him how he came up with good ideas. He admitted that he had never really given this much thought, but it was an excellent question. In looking back at his greatest campaigns, he said there was a common thread throughout them all that yielded great ideas.
It was doing basic research on the product. While this may not sound exciting, it is. As Mr. Reeves said, “a thousand ideas come swimming up.” The example most have heard is the Claude Hopkins story. He created a campaign that let readers know his bottles are steamed clean.
In fact, all bottles were steamed clean, but he was smart enough to mention it first in his advertising. Today, that might not be a compelling benefit, but it was then. Folks often became sick because of poor washing of bottles.
A year ago I did a direct mail package for a relatively unknown financial newsletter. In doing research, I found that the publisher had known Warren Buffet for many years. And years ago Buffet said that this newsletter was absolutely influential in creating his view of investing.
This fact was buried under a ton of other facts. Even the owner of the newsletter was hesitant about using it. From a promotional point of view, it’s solid gold. One of the greatest investors in the entire world loved his publication. Why hide that?
Also about a year ago, I did a magalog for a health supplement that helped people with arthritis. After looking into this in great detail, a point came “swimming up,” as Rosser Reeves would say.
This product was ordered by the wife of the Prime Minister of England. Here was someone with all the money in the world and access to all the doctors and experts in the world— and what does she do? She orders OUR PRODUCT.
When you find killer persuasive facts, you have a big edge over the competition. People begin to believe what you ’re saying. A friend of mine once said that your claims shouldn’t exceed your proof. And it’s true. Otherwise, you will come off as another person throwing out slogans. Give people a convincing reason why to buy your product.
Had I not been exposed to all those deeper, more insightful copywriting secrets over those 12 or so months – insights that Bill and Michael learned by analyzing thousands of breakthrough letters over many years – I doubt very much that I’d be enjoying the success I enjoy today.
And if you think I’m exaggerating, consider this …
Don Mahoney was in on those calls too. So were AWAI Board Members John Forde … Justin Ford … Jennifer Stevens … and countless others who have gone on to become great copywriters and direct-mail marketers.
It’s no coincidence that the very writers who worked so closely with Bill and Michael during those days went on to be very successful.
And I can tell you why …
It’s because we benefited directly from the many years Bill and Michael spent studying thousands of breakthrough letters by the top copywriters in the world. They’d break each one down … analyze the headline, the lead, the structure, the tempo, the content, the wording …
They came up with some fundamental rules of copywriting – rules every copywriter needs to follow in order to be successful. Those are the rules you’re discovering right now in your Accelerated Program for Six-Figure Copywriting.
But they also discovered that the consistently great copywriters did more than follow the basic rules. They had more sophisticated writing techniques. They connected with the reader in a deeper, more powerful way. They had a way of making the product they were selling “irresistible” to the reader.
These are the secrets Bill and Michael would feed me in our copy sessions. They made such a powerful impression on me that even when I sit down to write a letter today, I can still hear Bill and Michael telling me …
… You’re missing a key element here – remember to include all “four legs” of the stool.
… You’re talking too much about the product here – remember the “Secret of Transparency.”
… Your letter’s wandering here – stay close to your reader’s “core emotion.”
… Don’t let your reader lose interest here – you need to tighten up the “Golden Thread.”
… You need to address the deeper needs and wants of your reader – remember the “Secret of the Prism.”
… This headline and these bullets could be stronger – use the “4 U’s Rule” to make it more urgent and useful.
… Is this really the best lead for this package? Try a more “indirect” lead … or maybe a “fascination”-style lead would work best.
… and so on.
Now, you won’t find these secrets in your Accelerated Program – for good reason. They’re simply too advanced for people who have yet to master the basic skills. It would be like asking someone who just learned how to use Microsoft Windows to write a computer program for NASA.
But here’s the thing …
Being exposed to these “deeper secrets and techniques” early in my career was just the thing I needed to grow and mature as a writer.
The moment I started incorporating these high-level Master’s secrets into my copy, every one of my letters became a virtual “tour de force” in the mail. Suddenly, my packages were hitting all the right notes with my prospects. Orders were rolling in, often at a record-breaking pace. Product managers were thrilled. My letters mailed over and over again … with quantities numbering in the millions.
Marketing managers from everywhere knew my name. They were calling me up – offering me my choice of jobs. When I’d tell them I was completely booked up with work, they’d say, “No problem … call when you have an opening. Name your price and the product you’d like to write for … ”
And remember, I wasn’t the only one whose star was rising fast. Don, Justin, John, Jennifer, and many others exposed to these “Master’s secrets” over the years experienced similar – if not greater – success.
The Masters Secret
That Changed My Life …
The Secret of
“The Masterful Lead”
by Don Mahoney
I’d have to say that the thing that made the biggest difference in my career – and my ability to make hundreds of thousands of dollars a year – was learning how to write a masterful lead.
In fact, for me, once I have the lead I consider my job 80% done. It’s the hardest part by far. You have to carry the reader into your idea emotionally, not logically, and make the big promise to him in a way that’s totally believable.
After that, it’s all supportive work. If you have your reader that far, there’s no excuse for not carrying him the rest of the way.
Now, I’ve always been known as a highly productive copywriter. Because I am. And the way I’m able to be so productive is because I can get a project done in a short amount of time. To be a successful copywriter, it’s more than just being quick. The copy has to be good, too.
And for me, learning that Master’s Secret that led me to this ability to nail down a powerful lead in a short period of time is one of the main reasons I can do what I do. And in fact, as I was building my career, for a long time I charged half what other top copywriters charged. And I made more money than them.
How? By being able to crank out a top-performing package in a fraction of the time.
So to me, this is one of the most valuable lessons you can learn. Nail that lead, and the rest of the package pretty much writes itself. Fast. And for a lot of money.
Perhaps today you’re where my colleagues and I were not so long ago …
You’re getting into the business … mastering the basic secrets … beginning to write at a higher level.
More importantly, you love what you’re doing. You’re determined to be a top-notch copywriter – and you’re ready to know the deeper, more sophisticated copywriting secrets that helped us transform our careers.
But where do you find them? How do you take that all-important step to the next level in your copy career?
There’s only one place in the world: the AWAI “Master’s Program.”
Simply put, the Master’s Program is a collection of all the most powerful copywriting secrets you’ll ever need to know to become a great copywriter.
They’re Michael’s personal secrets. They’re Bill Bonner’s private secrets.
They’re the secrets developed by some of the legendary copywriters of our time – Gene Schwartz, Joe Karbo, David Ogilvy, Claude Hopkins, and Joe Sugarman – as well as the modern masters of our day, like Herschell Gordon Lewis, Peter Beteul, and Arthur Johnson.
They’re techniques, tricks, and secrets that have come from years and years of poring over some of the most successful direct-mail packages ever created. From breaking down the structure … understanding the different techniques great writers use to connect with their readers … understanding what it is that makes a successful letter’s promise and offer so compelling … and understanding what every successful letter has in common.
Bill and Michael understood early on that in our business “Copy Is King.” And understanding what makes great copy great is the key to building a successful direct-mail business.
“The Master's Program has become the cornerstone on which I’ve been able to successfully grow my business. Thanks to everything I’ve learned at AWAI, my copywriting income more than doubled last year. (Yippee!) In addition to local clients, I work with publishers nationwide to help them create compelling sales materials for their information products.”
— Beth E., Kandiyohi, MN
They were right.
These are the very secrets that helped Bill Bonner turn a burgeoning publishing company with one newsletter into a $350-million-per-year publishing empire. These are the very secrets that have not only made Michael Masterson a multimillionaire – but have made more than a dozen of the friends he shared them with millionaires too.
These are the secrets I use every day – and still refer to when I’m stuck or struggling with a package.
These are the secrets so many of AWAI’s most successful members chose to learn and master. And as a result, they’re realizing their dream – writing for some of the most prestigious direct-response firms in the country.
These are the deeper secrets that will give you unparalleled insight into how the selling process works – and how to use that knowledge to become one of the best copywriters and direct-response professionals in the country.
What’s more, these are the secrets guaranteed to provide you with that “breakthrough” moment … that instance when the sun suddenly breaks through the clouds and you can say to yourself …
“A-ha! Now I get it!
Now I understand the secret to writing a great sales letter like I never did before!”
I still remember when that happened to me.
“I am only three months into the Master's Program and already it has helped me land two new jobs. This program pays for itself many times over. I strongly recommend the Master’s Program to all AWAI members.”
— Paul D.,
Carlsbad, CA
Like many new copywriters, I focused my energies on selling the product. Then Michael explained his “Secret of Transparency” – which is all about getting to know your reader’s true needs, beliefs, and desires … and understanding that it’s not really the product that your prospect wants, but what that product can do for him.
Our job is to keep the product transparent and the benefits visible. Not just the obvious benefits, like wealth and freedom and good health. But the deeper benefits. The ones the prospect himself may not even be aware he wants …
Once this technique sunk in – and I understood it – writing letters became infinitely easier for me. It’s nothing I can define, really. It’s just that, all of a sudden, I had a better understanding of what my job as a copywriter was. Everything was coming more naturally to me. I was more confident every time I sat down to write a letter, simply because I had this knowledge in me … this deeper insight into what selling to my prospect was all about.
Joanne – the AWAI member who recently landed a plum copywriting position with one of Agora’s most successful financial divisions – agrees that the “Secret of Transparency” was a breakthrough for her as well …
“The ‘Transparency’ idea was huge for me. It really impressed on me the psychology of writing and selling,” she says.
With that secret firmly rooted, all the other secrets began connecting with me in ways that were just as powerful, including what I consider to be – by far – the five most important secrets you’ll ever learn as a copywriter …
For copywriters like you and me – this stuff is pure gold.
Think about it.
You and another writer are going head to head on a project. You know these advanced secrets – even just the few I’ve talked about so far. Your competition doesn’t. Who’s going to write the stronger letter?
You.
You’ll know your prospect better.
You’ll know that the secret to selling is to not sell the product.
Your letter will grab your prospect hard with a strong, bold lead – and you’ll keep his attention throughout, thanks to what you know about the “Golden Thread.”
Your letter will be built with the “four legs of the stool” firmly in place – virtually assuring that your package is stronger, more balanced, and loaded with promise, credibility, benefits, and proof.
And that’s after using just a few of the Master’s secrets …
In all, the AWAI Master’s Program has over 60 deep-rooted secrets – each explained in precise detail … with examples to help you understand them … and simple exercises designed to make sure you never forget them.
For instance:
In a moment, I’ll tell you how we’ve designed the Master’s Program to be the ultimate “working resource” for you – and why we’re convinced your writing will be better and stronger right from day one …
But first, you may be wondering, “Am I ready for the more advanced secrets found in the Master’s Program?”
Well, that depends on how serious you are about your copywriting – and how quickly you want your success to happen.
Here’s where we stand on that …
Until recently, we’ve hesitated to offer these Master’s secrets until all the “basic” work was finished. But then, people in the Master’s Program kept telling us – “Why did you wait to get me this information? This is stuff I could have used long ago. Had I had this in the early months, I’d be much further ahead by now.”
“The Master's Program has far exceeded my expectations!
Already with the first section, I have learned how to really zero in on my target audience. In fact, just working through the materials has reignited my enthusiasm and confidence. I have landed two new clients in the past months”
— Mark K.,
Ashburn, Virginia
And it’s true …
When I think back, some of these secrets were the first things I learned in those early call sessions, and although I may not have grasped them entirely at the time, they did stay with me. And, as my writing became better, I was able to infuse many of these ideas into my copy – little by little.
So, yes, knowing these advanced concepts early was a good thing for me …
Plus, we realized that the more motivated members of the basic program were blowing right through the basic material … and wanted the best stuff fast. That’s why we decided to make the Master’s secrets more readily available … so you can have these advanced selling secrets at your fingertips … and use them when you’re ready to “step things up” and reach your prospect on a much deeper level.
So once you’ve made that commitment to be a successful copywriter, there’s no reason not to get your hands on this advanced material today … and start putting the secrets to work for you just as soon as you’re ready …
If that’s where you stand – if you’re serious about your future success – then I promise you this will be an exhilarating experience for you. Because the insights you’re about to gain into the wonderful and lucrative world of copywriting can’t be found anywhere else.
Here’s how it works …
The Masters Secret
That Changed My Life …
The Secret of
“The Golden Thread”
by John Forde
I'd have to say the most important thing I've learned is Michael Masterson's concept of the "Golden Thread." Like most great ideas, it's pretty simple: the core idea of a sales message is like a golden thread, woven throughout the promo. It's just a way to remind myself to stay on track while I'm writing, or to get my writing back on track during the editing phase. But I'm such a kinetic thinker sometimes, it had revolutionary results. Suddenly I stopped getting lost in the little details and started seeing the "big picture" of some pretty tough copy challenges. I started cranking out packages that just "worked" and burst the six-figure income barrier.
Literally, I went from living on tuna fish dinners in my $365-a-month apartment … to eating out three nights a week at nice restaurants … while wiping out every penny of debt (I haven't carried any in ten years) … writing checks for $10,000 in surprise medical bills and $11,000 to cover the rest of my wife's graduate school loans … and piling up about $300K in savings and investments. Not bad. But it wasn't just the money. Success makes it easy for me to work from wherever I want, whenever I want. Which I consider a huge perk. After my copy really started working for me (thanks to the "golden thread" secret and a few other key Master's secrets, I can almost guarantee clients a control package every time I sit down to write) … I packed up my laptop and moved to Manhattan for three years. Now I work and travel in Europe. There's always plenty of work to do. And I can't tell you how great it is to be able to do it from wherever I can find an electrical outlet and an Internet connection.
I've internalized most of the other master's secrets and use them now without really thinking about them. But the "golden thread" is one that definitely sits there, right in front of me, every time I'm at the keyboard typing or picking up my red pen to run through my first round of cuts and edits. I'm not sure where I'd be without it.
The AWAI Master’s Program is a complete and comprehensive volume of all the greatest and most potent copywriting secrets, tips, and techniques known to work in our business.
The program is divided into 24 distinct and power-packed sessions. We’ve structured it in such a way that you’re able to focus on one secret at a time, so when you sit down to write, all this powerful information will be “center of mind” when you need it.
You’ll find the most important and powerful secrets early on in the program – the secrets that let you better understand your prospect and know his core buying emotion … the “Secret of Transparency” (which had such a dramatic impact on my copy career) … the secret of writing masterful leads and headlines … powerful bullet writing … the secret of the “Golden Thread” … and the secret of the “Four-Legged Stool.”
In fact, the first eight sessions of the Master’s Program, alone, have the power to transform your copywriting career!
But it gets even better.
From there, you build on what you know with the finer points of great copy that will add polish and greater focus to any direct-mail project you take on. Let’s face it. So much of copywriting success – like success in anything – comes from the smaller things you do right … the things that might not seem so big or important …
Like getting the right “voice” for your package …
As you well know, good copy doesn’t scream “buy this” at your prospect. Good copy establishes a trusting relationship between you and your prospect. Good copy is empathetic toward his or her wants and needs. Good copy establishes a tone of authority – without talking “down” to your reader. That’s what I mean by the right voice … and when you combine the right voice with a good, solid, well-structured letter – watch out! Those promotions have been known to mail successfully for years … and pay tens of thousands of dollars in royalties.
Things like “Mastering the Offer” …
Most copywriters you’ll be up against take the offer for granted. But what if your offers were better than anyone else’s? What if you knew the secret for creating an offer that’s absolutely irresistible to your reader? How much more successful would your letters be?
Things like getting your letter started …
New copywriters are constantly telling me that their biggest challenge is getting those first few words on the page. You should read Don’s “Staring at the Blank Page” secret for getting started. It’s so simple and powerful – I can’t tell you how many times it’s helped me jumpstart a package.
And what if you knew of all the most successful “approaches” you can take with your letter? Winning techniques like …
All these direct-mail approaches are proven winners – and you’ll find out how to use them in your Master’s Program.
But the Master’s Program isn’t just about memorizing one secret after another.
It’s much more than that …
It’s about applying these deeper secrets – to a series of live “spec” assignments that come with the Master’s Program.
Now, understand that these aren’t just “practice letters” that you write for fun …
These are actual letters for real products that you’ll write for real clients.
The idea is very simple.
You have basic copywriting knowledge from your Accelerated Program. Absorb the deeper insights and breakthrough ideas you’ll get from the Master’s Program. Apply all this newfound knowledge and insights to any of the live spec assignments that interest you.
In all, there are six spec assignments you can choose from – including a few AWAI products you know.
You can do one, a few, or all six if you like!
And here’s the thing …
We’ll give you complete instructions on how to submit your letter to the marketing director of the company. If they test your letter – and it’s successful in the mail – they’ll pay you for your work … a writing fee plus any royalties from future mailings.
But these aren’t the only spec assignments you’ll have access to once you sign up for the Master’s Program. Many more await you on our AWAI website under the special “Master’s Only” section of our “$10K Challenge” page.
There you’ll find our most advanced spec assignments for a long list of AWAI products – including the Accelerated Program you’re working on now … our “Freelance Writing Success in a Box” kit … our Travel Writer’s Program … and 12 more!
These are assignments that might be a little too much for those in the basic program to take on – but with the skills you’ll know by working your way through the Master’s Program, you’ll be ready. They pay better than the basic spec assignments too – up to $1,000 for a headline and lead idea that’s accepted … another $1,000 for the finished letter … and royalties should your letter beat the control when it’s mailed.
Beyond the money, though, these assignments are an excellent way to get you and your writing known to us … get your foot in the copywriting door … and launch your six-figure career quickly. Who better to write for, after all, than the very people who are committed to your success!
But wait.
There are still a few things I haven’t told you about, including something very exciting that I just found out we added to the program …
All 24 Master’s Program sessions include a bonus CD – which has the entire session in audio format. This is great, because you can read about the secret in the written materials … then, later on, you can pop in the CD while driving in your car or relaxing on the couch and have the whole thing reinforced.
Another thing I found with the CDs is that, in virtually every session, I was able to pick up something I missed while reading the program! It’s a great way to make sure you don’t miss a thing when it comes to these all-powerful secrets.
There’s more …
In addition to the 24 sessions and all those CDs, there are 18 specially written and carefully chosen bonuses waiting for you …
This special “Master’s Library” of bonuses gives you all the information every master copywriter needs to know – from how to research over the internet … to what the government says you can and can’t do or say in your promotions.
You’ll find all 18 of these bonuses on a convenient, indexed CD you can keep handy by your computer. Or you can do what I did – print them all out, drop them in one of those three-ring binders, and start your own “Writer’s Resource” library.
This really is an amazing storehouse of information …
Among my favorites:
Plus 13 more – each designed to boost your writing skills … build up your understanding of the direct-response industry … and get you writing at the Master’s level faster than you ever thought possible.
Am I finished? Nope.
I want to give you this next little freebie because I think it’s something every copywriter should have – whether you’re just starting out or you’re a seasoned pro: 60 full “archived” issues (five full years’ worth) of Monthly Copywriting Genius.
In my opinion, MCG has long been one of the best learning resources we’ve ever offered. Each month for the past five years, we’ve taken a blockbuster control written by a copywriting master (including such copywriting luminaries as Clayton Makepeace, Arthur Johnson, Herschell Gordon Lewis, Don Mahoney and more), analyzed it, and broken it down, page by page, paragraph by paragraph. You see precisely what made it the breakthrough letter it is … and gain invaluable insights into how and why the writer did what he or she did at every stage.
There’s also a tremendously insightful interview, where you’re able to “get inside the head” of the writer … and understand some of the more advanced techniques and strategies that were used to produce such a powerful control.
Think of this added “Master’s” MCG bonus as your “Hall of Fame” book on steroids! Sixty of the most successful (and current) sales letters ever written – covering everything from business-to-business … consumer products … to multimillion-dollar financial and health promotions … analyzed in far greater detail than your “Hall of Fame” book. Plus, you get the wisdom and insights from the copywriters who wrote them via the in-depth interview.
But there’s more. Also included in this “ultimate MCG clip file” resource are 20 or our most powerful “$20K Secret” reports – where each month, you’ll discover a unique and powerful secret about the letter you’ve just studied that can put an extra $20,000 a year in your bank account!
You’ll be amazed by how one seemingly innocent little “trick” or technique can make a huge impact on a sales letter. I just used a strategy I learned from MCG for one of my recent campaigns, and it literally doubled response in a day – and made me an extra $12,000 in royalties. You can bet I’ll use this little trick again when the time’s right!
Soon we’ll be offering this resource to AWAI members at the bargain basement price of $297. But as a Master’s Program owner, you’ll not only be the first to see it – but get it absolutely free of charge.
No question, between the Master’s Program, this amazing Monthly Copywriting Genius “Archive Collection,” and the library of resources you’ll have by your side, you’ll have everything you need to take that monumental step to “A-level” copywriter.
But that’s not all you’ll get when you take advantage of this very special Master’s Program offer.
We also have, here in our hands, a freshly revised essay on a powerfully advanced copywriting technique called the “Categorical Imperative.”
What is the “Categorical Imperative”? I first heard the term sitting in a copy review session with Bill Bonner and Michael Masterson eight, maybe nine, years ago. And it was one of those amazing “ideas” that stuck with me and changed the way I wrote copy forever.
In fact, understanding and using this one little secret can literally fix what’s wrong with most of the copy I read from new copywriters virtually instantaneously.
I know that sounds like an incredible statement to make – but hear me out. You see, one of the biggest mistakes we copywriters make (yours truly included) is to write copy that becomes too linear … too predictable. In other words, the reader can sense which direction you’re going to take him in – and once he or she realizes that – your copy is doomed.
Great copy is entirely unpredictable. It has the reader wondering where you’re going to take him next … what amazing little secret you’re going to reveal next … what bold or incredible statement or promise you’re going to make next.
Take movies, for instance. Nothing’s more disappointing than a film that takes you down a familiar path with a predictable ending. The best movies are the ones that keep you emotionally riveted with interesting and surprising plot twists – and an ending you never dreamed could happen! Your copy needs to do that same thing. And understanding the categorical imperative will ensure every letter you write from this day forward has that “captivating magic” all great sales letters have.
And that’s a promise. I can make that promise to you because I can say without hesitation that this is one of a handful of secrets I learned over the years that let me take my copywriting to a much higher level. And I’m positive it will do the same for you as well.
Know, too, that only Master’s Program folks will ever see this special essay. Why? Because clearly this is one of those “advanced secrets” you need to learn after you’re comfortable with the basic stuff.
So my advice to you is this: when you get your Master’s Program – and all the resources and bonuses that come along with it – sort through everything, find this amazing little essay, and read it very carefully, several times over! And I promise you, the business of copywriting will suddenly make a whole lot more sense to you.
What else will you get with this special Master’s offer?
There is one more thing …
It’s something Michael and Don and some others I consider to be the best “idea” people in the business helped me create just a few months ago. It’s a special report I decided to write after five years of working with new copywriters …
You see, over that time, I noticed there were a lot of people out there who could write well. But there was one thing missing from much of the new copy I was seeing – one thing that caused the copy to “fall flat” in a predictable way … and handcuffed the writer’s ability to write a good, strong, convincing letter.
Here’s a little background …
In the basic copywriting program, we talk about the importance of the “Big Idea” – which is the central theme that anchors your promotion … how you choose to position your product in the marketplace … and how you differentiate your product from all others out there.
But what we don’t do is explain to you in any detail how to find and develop that all-captivating “Big Idea” that’s going to set your promotion apart from all the others.
Understand that it’s not because we wanted to keep it from you. It’s just that – earlier in the learning process – it’s much more important for you to understand the basics of good writing and the proper structure of the sales letter.
It’s like golf. When you’re learning to play, you learn the grip, stance and basic swing – everything you need to hit the ball straight. Only once you’ve mastered the straight shot do you start learning how to draw and fade the ball to the left or right. Same thing with your copy.
But once you’re comfortable with the basics, the “Big Idea” lesson could just be the “breakthrough” experience that’ll quickly shift your copywriting into the highest gear.
Whether you’re selling a financial newsletter, a health product, a consumer device, a self-help product, or a fundraising drive – the unique idea you choose to “anchor” your sales letter can make or break the success of your package.
In this special report, I share with you my process for developing “Big Ideas” for my promos. I tell you the research I do … the process I use for determining if an idea is strong enough or not.
I asked Michael Masterson his secrets on the “Big Idea” subject and, as usual, he came through with an that’s so simple … so crystal clear … that it was all I could do to not question him as to why he kept it from me all these years!
I also talked with my friend Mike Palmer over at Stansberry Research. Mike and his team are absolute masters at finding new and exciting ways to position the most ordinary of ideas. In fact, I’ve long felt that the Stansberry copy team has revolutionized the business of financial copywriting through their innovative and creative use of the “Big Idea.”
I have a ton of examples where ordinary products have been completely transformed and made irresistible by a good, simple, yet compelling “Big Idea” – and I’ll show them to you in this special report.
By the end of it all, you’ll no longer struggle to anchor your product with a winning “Big Idea.” All at once, you’ll understand the whole concept … and know just how to go about unearthing that “Big Idea” that makes your sales letter a “must read,” instead of just another piece of junk mail.
And these days, the “Big Idea” is more important than ever. Why? Because of the internet, your prospects are exposed to more copy than ever before. For your letter to be ultra-successful, it needs to break through all that “clutter.” It’s the difference between your reader picking up your letter and saying “Oh, yeah, I’ve seen this before,” and “Wow, this is interesting. Let’s see what this is all about.”
Something else happens when you’re able to anchor your letter with a powerful “Big Idea” too. Suddenly, headlines come easier. Leads practically fall onto the page. Your letter flows much easier. That’s because a good idea breeds good copy. You’re excited about it. You believe in it. And I can tell you from personal experience … my best results have always come when I’m most excited about the product I’m writing about and the “Big Idea” behind it.
As a member of our Master’s Program, you’ll be among the first to see this very important, very insightful report.
And it’s just one of the many insights you’ll find in the Master’s Program that’ll give you a distinctive edge over so many other copywriters working in our field.
You know, if you’re serious about becoming a great copywriter, I can’t think of a better way to jumpstart your career than with the advanced secrets you’ll learn through the Master’s Program …
… the insights you’ll gain from the 60 archived issues of Monthly Copywriting Genius …
… the depth your copy will take on with the knowledge you’ll gain from my “Big Idea” report …
… your deep understanding of the “Categorical Imperative” that will ensure every letter you write from this day forward has that “captivating magic” all great sales letters have …
It’s no coincidence that many of the AWAI-trained copywriters who are writing for money today have succeeded because of the deeper secrets they’ve learned through the Master’s Program.
Susan Clark is an excellent example. She’s an AWAI member who has mastered many of the advanced copywriting secrets contained in the Master’s Program. Take a look at the email we received from Jenny Thompson, who runs the Agora Health publishing division and recently hired Susan for a project:
We’ve just finished our edits on Susan Clark’s first full-blown newsletter package for us, and I couldn’t be more excited. Honestly, it was the best first package I’ve ever seen from a writer. She applied all the elements of great copywriting almost flawlessly.
At the same time, we had commissioned one of the greats for a package for another newsletter. He was credited with writing one of the most successful controls in the health market over the past 10 years. Unfortunately, we’ve had to kill that package. He just couldn’t capture our voice and audience as successfully as Susan did.
So she has a lot to be proud of.
Knowing she will be in demand, I’ve asked my creative manager to book her in advance for a few jobs.
Have a great day – and keep developing great talent.
Jenny
Wouldn’t it be great to have one of the most powerful direct-mail marketers write a letter like that about you?
With 19 years of experience writing marketing copy, Julia Thomas understood the basics of copywriting when she enrolled in the basic program back in 2004. But it was only when she got the Master’s Program that she really started to “get” it …
“The Master’s Program was the first time someone took me, step by step, through the techniques used in great copywriting – how to write a strong lead, keep the product transparent etc. All the secrets I suspected other writers were using, but that I didn’t recognize until I went through the Master’s Program.”
Russ Banister credits the Master’s Program with playing a huge role in his career transition …
“It was only after I took the Master’s Program that I had the confidence to become a copywriter. My self esteem has grown because I’m doing something I’m good at and I’m recognized for.”
Mark Kwasny says he’ll crack the $100K income barrier this year, thanks to the Master’s Program … primarily because the program helped him with something he long struggled with as a copywriter:
“The first few chapters [of the Master’s Program] go into depth about knowing your prospect. They really helped me understand who I was writing to … getting a picture of that person and then targeting my writing to them – it’s increased the effectiveness of my writing tenfold. For me that was worth the price of the program right there.”
I could rattle off the names and stories of many more AWAI members who are working as paid, successful copywriters today thanks to the Master’s Program. People I’ve talked to at Bootcamp … people I’ve worked with on projects through AWAI and Agora … emails Katie Yeakle and the AWAI team have sent me about members who have “broken through” and landed choice assignments with some of the top direct marketers in the country.
If I did, this letter would be a hundred pages long.
So let me sum it up: No single resource I know of will help you “step up to the challenge” like AWAI’s Master’s Program can.
And now, with your “Five-Year Archive Edition” of Monthly Copywriting Genius (60 of the world’s most successful sales letters of the past five years!), where you “get inside the heads” of master copywriters and understand why their promotions were smashing successes …
Plus the 18 FREE writing companion bonuses I mentioned that are jam-packed with hundreds of tips and secrets about all facets of the copywriting business …
And the “Categorical Imperative” essay – the insight that changed the way I write copy forever …
You’ll have everything you need (and more) to elevate your copywriting skills to the highest levels.
And don’t forget the “Big Idea” special report that you'll get immediately – complete with working samples and techniques for developing a new, exciting, fresh, and compelling “Big Idea” for every package you write.
In fact, I’m willing to go out on a limb to say that nowhere will you find such power-packed, copywriting-specific expertise offered in one “get-it-all-at-once” package.
What’s the value of all this knowledge, know-how, and expertise?
The Master’s Program by itself is a tremendous bargain for what amounts to a “graduate degree” in the business of copywriting. Any graduate program in any college could leave you $30,000 poorer – and you wouldn’t have a fraction of the useable skills the AWAI Master’s Program gives you. And when you add what you’ll get from Monthly Copywriting Genius to the mix, you’ve got quite a “one-two punch.”
Even if you’re not quite ready to begin the Master’s Program – but have every intention of getting to it once you finish your Accelerated Program – I encourage you to order it today at the discounted $890 full-pay price. After all, no one’s saying you need to start right away. Just keep it aside until you’re ready to advance.
As if you need any more incentive, here’s something to sweeten the deal just a little more: $200 off the already discounted price.
It’s not often we discount our most advanced programs. They’re already tremendous bargains when you consider the impact just one of the secrets in this program can have on your writing career.
But if a $200 savings will help you make the decision to take a major step in your copywriting career – and a few months from now we can add another Master’s Success Story to our already fat file – we’re happy to do it.
So here’s the deal …
Order the Master’s Program between now and Friday, July 18th at midnight, and you can have the entire Master’s Program – including the Monthly Copywriting Genius archives (itself a $237 value) … the more than 20 special reports and bonuses – and the “Big Idea” report … all for just $690.
That’s a 22% savings off the already discounted price.
And if you’d prefer to take advantage of our “Master’s-Secret-a-Month” installment plan, the price is $39 a month for 24 months. But under this special limited time arrangement, we’ll send you the final five lessons absolutely free! (Plus, you get all the bonuses mentioned upfront – with your first session!)
So it’s your choice. Pay upfront and get the immediate $200 discount. Or get a lesson a month for just $39 – billed to your credit card over the next 19 months … and your final five months are free.
There’s one more thing before you sign up. There’s our guarantee to talk about – which is our standard promise to you for everything we offer:
Take a look at three Master’s Program installments. If you’re not absolutely thrilled with the deeper secrets you’re discovering, simply return them (not the bonuses – they’re yours to keep, regardless) and we’ll issue you a full refund. If, after three months, you decide you don’t want any more Master’s Program installments, just tell us – and we’ll stop billing your credit card.
If you choose to get the whole program at once, take 30 days to look it over. If you’re not thrilled, just return the unmarked materials for a full refund. (Again, keep the bonuses – they’re yours.)
Now I know we’ve covered a lot here. And everything you get with this amazing offer might be a little overwhelming.
So allow me to take a moment to recap. You get:
Plus, there’ll be surprises along the way … and anytime we update, revise, or add a section to the program, we’ll be sure to send you the newest and latest version.
A lot of stuff, I know.
But there’s one more thing I need to tell you about …
As a Master’s Program member, you’ll have special access to AWAI’s Job Board at DirectResponseJobs.com. Besides being able to view all the latest copywriting jobs available, you’ll have access to a special page where you can post your very own professional “profile.” Marketers and prospective clients can go there to check out the work you’ve done … who you’ve worked for … find out what kinds of projects you like working on. You can also include links to promotions you’ve done – even make your own special offers that’ll grab the attention of marketers in search of writers.
DirectResponseJobs.com is a fantastic resource for the industry – but for our Master’s members, it’s an especially powerful tool. It’s like a never-ending job fair – one that’s working for you 24 hours a day, 7 days a week!
So you see, if you’re serious about succeeding, we do everything we can to help you. And that means not only giving you the tools you need – but also putting you in touch with prospective clients.
And don’t forget – if you’re not absolutely thrilled with your Master’s Program experience … if you’re not convinced that the information you’re getting will help you become one of the top copywriters in the country … simply return the material within 30 days and we’ll send any money you’ve paid for the Master’s Program right back to you. (And all the special bonuses are yours to keep.)“I thought I was a pretty smart copywriter – making over $1,000 a week with my ‘niche’ specialty – writing space ads. But, just one concept I learned from AWAI’s Master’s Program has rocketed my little at-home business into the $10K-a-month club. I feel I’m now part of a ‘secret club.’ A small, exclusive group of highly paid, specially trained individuals who are in great demand by direct marketers all over the world. It’s very cool to be needed, respected and … successful!”
— Mike S.,
Palm Cove, FL
Quite frankly, there’s not a better time to take advantage of this offer.
We’ve just recently updated and freshened up the Master’s Program …
You’ll be among the very first to see and benefit from my “Big Idea” special report …
You’ll get to access the “Five-Year Archive Edition” of MCG … learn just what made each blockbuster control so successful … and hear tips and secrets from the writers who wrote them …
We’ve added the 24 CDs, so you don’t miss one word of any Master’s session …
We’ve added a ton of new and exciting bonuses – all of which are designed to help you succeed in all aspects of your copywriting career …
We’ve made meeting and getting clients as easy as possible for you …
So if you’re ready to get serious about your copywriting career, there’s never been a better time.
But hurry …
The $200 discount offer only lasts until midnight, July 18th. After that, if you want to own our industry-famous Master’s Program, you’ll have to pay the full price.
That’s why the time to order is now.
I hope to count you among our small group of “Masters” soon! Call Pat, Barb, Debbie or Tammy at 866-879-2924 or click here to order today.
Sincerely,
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Paul Hollingshead
Co-Founder, Co-Chairman, AWAI
P.S. Remember … there’s absolutely no risk. If you decide the Master’s Program is not for you, simply return the unmarked program materials within 30 days and you’ll receive a full refund of any money you’ve paid. No matter what, all the bonuses are yours to keep.
American Writers & Artists Inc.